IELTS Writing Task 2. Agree. Save or Spend. 雅思写作2. 同意与否. 省钱还是花钱.

Student’s Plan & Outline: Save or Spend.

Intro:

Topic: rewrite the task in one sentence

Task: state your view: I agree that it is better to save

Main Body (2-3 pts):

R1 saving up is a prudent safeguard

Eg person might lose his job

R2 a good form of discipline

Eg self-control enables a person to build up a big amount

R3 people to fall sick and suffer in financial turmoil

Eg help a person gain some control in his life

Therefore I feel that rational savings are a good cause

Concession:

live for the moments

it is unwise to throw caution to the wind. 

Conclusion:

the wiser choice is to save;

is a good form of discipline; safeguard our future; act as a buffer against setbacks

R = Reason ; Eg = Example

Ask yourself:

Is my outline logical? 大纲合乎逻辑吗？

Is there enough reasons and examples? 有足够的理由和例子吗？

Is there a progression? 有进展吗？